This is not a poem. This has music to it. It is a short song and you know what...Miley Cyrus has short songs that are shorter than this she just repeates stanza's over again. And as for punctuation. Go ahead and knock yourself out.
The drops of water fall on my windowsill
And if I screamed
No one would come to the rescue
I put my favorite song on repeat
What does it matter
No one will hear it
The thunder rumbles through the sky
Tears drizzle from my eyes
Why am I wasting my time
Why am I doing this
No one will see them
No one cares
The lightning flashes from cloud to cloud
I stand tall and will never fall down
Go ahead and push
But you just watch
Your time will come around
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I can't say this was a great song, it should have been in the lyric poetry. FOR ME IT WAS TOO short. But the words were beautiful. In that case I give you a star.
YWS members should of been there when she sang this song. SHe doesn't write things down until she is done. This came straight out and was sung in perfect tune. It was absolutely beautiful. Of course, it was storming pretty bad and me, Taylor, and Jenny were just sitting around and a silence came. Taylor started humming and then just broke into song. And like ten-fifteen minutes later, the storm stopped. It was amazing. Oh god, I miss her already. I hope she gets better.